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What can I say, when you left me this way
Crying, screaming on the floor
Every breathe I take is a whisper,
Saying your name.

Why cant you see,
That I still love you
Everything you ever did to me
Will never end my need of you


Chorus:
Every look you gave me,
And every song you played me,
Made me fall deeper everyday
Into this never ending hole
I cursed your very name, when really its all I spoke
Please come back to me

Every time I see your face,
My heart stops beating,
Just for a while
Every time I hear your voice

I cant control what I do,
How can you just leave me
Reaching out to you
Staring at me, merciless

Bridge:
Why cant you see
Every little thing you do to me
Please come back to me


Chorus:
Every look you gave me,
And every song you played me,
Made me fall deeper everyday
Into this never ending hole
I cursed your very name, when really its all I spoke
Please come back to me


Chorus:
Every look you gave me,
And every song you played me,
Made me fall deeper everyday
Into this never ending hole
I cursed your very name, when really its all I spoke
Please come back to me
©2008-2009 ~Burning-Notes
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This is a song i wrote :/ It doesnt have a melody yet, but its being worked on .
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What kind of [basic] tune were you thinking of?

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“’…Real life is a story... The world is a library… And you’ll never get to read the same book twice.’”
I dont have one, but my friend kevin is actually writing a melody to it and putting it on youtube ;]]

So it should be exciting

-Jonna

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"As much as you wait time wont wait for you. As much as you wait I wont wait for you."
-Emarosa
Send me a "note" when it's up! :D

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“’…Real life is a story... The world is a library… And you’ll never get to read the same book twice.’”
Haha i definetly will, he is being uber slow at making it. He's learning some song i told him about, because he thinks its amazing.

-Jonna

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"As much as you wait time wont wait for you. As much as you wait I wont wait for you."
-Emarosa

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